PASSIONATE LOVER

Where are you trudging to dear cyclist
turn around my home is not far it's near
the setting sun I am to show you

once a home of warmth
and love
just come in you appear in passion
come move in
see the sun setting

its like the beginning
of a lovely sojourn
enjoy in the finale
tired as you appear to be
come fathom my hospitality

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

3 years 2 months ago

in this line: Where are you trudging to dear cyclist a cyclist would not be trudging (a tern used for walking. he would be peddling)

favorite lines:
its like the beginning
of a lovely sojourn
enjoy in the finale
tired as you appear to be
come fathom my hospitality

I think this is one of your best poems!
*hugs, Cat

3 years 2 months ago

in the prompt
the tired guy is simply walking alongside with his cycle

thanks we all trudge along
few can ride for long

3 years 2 months ago

I revisited the prompt in time you are right he was riding now i trudge along thanks Cats

3 years 2 months ago

that is what Cats are for ;)

*hugs

3 years 2 months ago

aha twins
minds