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May 12, 2022
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THE LOVE OF PETS
at least the dog
also has a friend
he needs to look after
both mutually
so I'm equally happy
with all my pets who lived with me
they're as human
if not more lovable
dear poets
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 2 months ago
dear lovedly,
it is so very true what you have said about pets. they become our children and family. I know mine have. intelligent and loving, too!
*hugs, Cat >{^*;*^}<
lovedly
3 years 2 months ago
Am I not lucky
at my age
now all are treating me
as the third pet
haha lol
Candlewitch
3 years 2 months ago
it is true...
you are loved.
*smiles, Cat
Ray Whitaker
3 years 2 months ago
I've never lost a dog that I wasn't affected
Dogs are my friends. Had one since I was a kid. got one now.
Lovedly, I'd make you into a pet, but you don't fetch and bring back the ball.... laughing
lovedly
3 years 2 months ago
high
send me a big ball
I'd kick it back
no teeth left to bite
any ball
lol haha
thanks
friendly poet Ray
Mr joghe
3 years 2 months ago
You really show the
You really show the relationship that exists between the pet and you in the line 2 stanza 2.
I like the poem.