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THE LOVE OF PETS

at least the dog
also has a friend
he needs to look after
both mutually

so I'm equally happy
with all my pets who lived with me
they're as human
if not more lovable
dear poets

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

3 years 2 months ago

dear lovedly,

it is so very true what you have said about pets. they become our children and family. I know mine have. intelligent and loving, too!

*hugs, Cat >{^*;*^}<

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 2 months ago

Am I not lucky

at my age
now all are treating me
as the third pet
haha lol

lovedly

lovedly

3 years 2 months ago

high

send me a big ball
I'd kick it back
no teeth left to bite
any ball
lol haha
thanks
friendly poet Ray

Mr joghe

Mr joghe

3 years 2 months ago

You really show the

You really show the relationship that exists between the pet and you in the line 2 stanza 2.
I like the poem.