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lovedly
lovedly
May 16, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Take Me To the Otherside

Take me to the other side
where my brighter future
as you all now say lies

I have reached the zenith
which height that
none can relay

I take it as
MOUNT EVEREST
many reached the top
I can now only fly over it
just send a 'copter to me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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scribbler

3 years 1 month ago

hi loved

We get to that other side soon enough. All say......none can say ? i think you need to work on these two lines a bit

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

3 years 1 month ago

dear lovedly,

NO!!! don't scrap it! I hope we both have a pleasant and easy landing after the thrill of soaring over the heights!

*love, Cat