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May 23, 2022
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A sabbatical intended now CONTEST POEM OF THE WEEK
Would you like a break
a sabbatical
make no mistake
a few hours leave I take
for more poetry to make
as I visit the wash room
the loo
get rid of my nose of flu
no not Covid
(that wasn't home in 2015)
will it do
I ask of you...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 1 month ago
dear lovely lovedly,
I think you have an excellent idea!!!
*hugs, Cat
Geezer
3 years 1 month ago
Yes...
a break is something we all should take
go down by the river
Too many days we don't make
time, not even a sliver
Grab a pole, dig some worms
put your line in the water
Sit by a pond or the sea
I think it's something to order
Come back around
refreshed once again
I sit here on common ground
while you rid yourself of pain
~ Geez.
.
lovedly
3 years 1 month ago
Gee.....read till I come back after meeting mama
Mamas Waiting Hopefully
BUT THE DOC
Says
HE Wonders
HOW I AM Holding
TO This Earth
Since Long
SO Long
HOW Much More
HE CAN'T Guess
BUT Does Profess
Some DAY
IF NOT Today
I Shall
AS I Must
GO Away
LET THE DAY Come
ONE DAY
Some DAY
ANY DAY
When
HE CAN'T Play Magic
HE'S A DOC Only
scribbler
3 years 1 month ago
Hi loved
we all deserve a break sometimes just make sure your break isn't a bone
lovedly
3 years 1 month ago
our break isn't a bone
glad to see the star
from distant far
is it u STAN
AH AH
Edward nigma
3 years 1 month ago
I understand the message
Sabbatical? It doesn’t connect to the rest and breaks the flow of rhyme and
Changes pattern of rhythm. Other then that I enjoyed it and I also relate you can always take a break but not without a good reason. Thank you for this poem
lovedly
3 years 1 month ago
thanks
for replying for the first time Hope u r well I AM NOT MUCH OF A POET TRYING SINCE 6 DECADES WILL I ever be????
Edward nigma
3 years ago
Thank you
I am doing well still heal but we’ll all the same