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Jun 03, 2022
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Clueless
You are completely
clueless
as too what this has
done
I can assure you
this has been no fun
it is ridiculous
the way you behave
your a complete nuisance
some might say!
About This Poem
Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years ago
hello Lillyput,
welcome to the Neopoet poetry site. it is very nice to meet you. if you need help or have any questions, please ask me. if I cannot help, I will find someone who can. I completely understand your poem! I have a nephew who was always doing outrageous things. and he couldn't figure out why he was always in trouble! I am looking forward to reading more of your poems.
*hugs, Cat
Jackweb
3 years ago
Hello Lilly!
Welcome to neopoet!
Just know there's no perfection in human character, attitude. So, you don't expect good output from people all the time. Some people needs to be managed hence we all are in learning curve. There are times we need to ignore some certain behaviours from folks within us.