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Jun 28, 2022
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Too Young
On my eighteenth birthday,
I was blue and depressed.
Didn’t want to grow up.
With childhood I was impressed.
Now in my fortieth summer
The world really amazes me,
I still think and wonder
What yet to do and be.
I am still curious like a child
With thoughts and actions rather wild,
I hate to do what I am told.
Nothing is what time means to me,
I still don’t want grown up to be.
I’m just too young to be old.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Jackweb
3 years ago
Hello!
Juvenile delinquency refers to the failure of the children and youth to meet certain obligations expected of them by the society in which they live.
Jack W. Stanley
3 years ago
Hello Onyinyechi
That is correct. Every imposed obligation is a possible path to revolt.
Jackweb
3 years ago
Yeah!
Exactly Jack W.
Rosewood Apothecary
3 years ago
43 year old child here
Great poem. Awesome subject. Your comment however…striking!
“Every imposed obligation is a possible path to revolt.“
That’s poetic as ever!
Tim
Jack W. Stanley
3 years ago
Hello Tim,
Many thanks for your comment.
Cheers,
Jack
Candlewitch
3 years ago
LOL!
have you been reading my mind? LOL!
*always, Cat & eddy styx
*
Jack W. Stanley
3 years ago
Hello Cat & eddy ;-)
It is quite possible.