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loved
By loved, 24 March, 2011

wHEN wE gRIEVE

When my grandma died
Years ago
They celebrated her age...

Times have changed
Those who lived well
Drink to their good life
Passed by them

In heaven they will be blessed
Neither would they know
Nor you.
Take rest
THEN
Normal work continue

M

magics02

14 years 3 months ago

Sad loved?

I like this tad bit of yours and wanted to tell you so. I have nothing to crit just I like it

Blessings
Mona

M

magics02

14 years 3 months ago

You are so compassionate

Of the fellow writers on here loved and you are to be admired for this. Thank you for telling me

Mona
xox

loved

loved

14 years 3 months ago

Please send him a message

.Please send him a message

He is perhaps
In a state of shock,
Will need your comfort
At this hour of grief.
No matter how old
The departed soul may be,
We have to feel a void,
For some time.
It’s at this hour
We need friends
Upon whose shoulders
We can rest our heads and cry

S

scribbler

14 years 3 months ago

hello

i know he will appreciate this...................stan

loved

loved

14 years 3 months ago

thanks a lot shirls

nice of u
we must come forth at the hour of grief
in joy
many come even univited