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Jul 13, 2022
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My journey
Only by faith
Will better days Arrive
I must remember the better days
The way we loved
Balanced
each day
surrendering always by compromise
To continue my journey
For better days to survive
I must let go
To give my heart freedom I need peace of mind
So within my heart for her a small part will be saved
A decision to love again at this point
Only faith will provide
About This Poem
Last Few Words: My girlfriend passed away in May .I'm writing a tribute to her in poetry. She was the love of my life
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
c lynn brooks
2 years 11 months ago
Hello
It seems you have been hurt beyond words. But you are ready to get back on that horse and ride again
Candlewitch
2 years 11 months ago
dear Trouble,
when the time is right, you will know it. but don't try to force it. you need time to heal, too. you have had a trauma to the heart, soul and psyche. give it all the time it needs for healing.
always, Cat