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Jul 13, 2022
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Tangerine Dreams
Arise
Shake the cobwebs
From your eyes
Face the ochre skies
Cadmium and lace
A pumpkin face
Brassy hair
Skin whiter than fair
Coral shore
Titian lore
Peaceful slumber
Wrapped in peachy haze
Tangerine dreams
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
3 years ago
Yes!
That’s a good title and a better poem.
Tim
RoseBlack
3 years ago
Thank you
This was fun! Onward to the next color
Candlewitch
3 years ago
dear RoseB.
I really like the way you have handled this challenge! extremely fanciful. thanks for answering the colors challenge!
*hugs, Cat
RoseBlack
3 years ago
Hi Cat
Thank you for creating this challenge! It has been so much fun. I would like to see more informal challenges like this. The response has been widely received!
Candlewitch
3 years ago
dear, RB,
you are entirely welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
do you have some Taurus in any of your houses or moon sign?
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RoseBlack
3 years ago
Maybe
I don't know how I would tell if there was Taurus
Candlewitch
3 years ago
google it...
it might take a few tries, but knowing your DOB is the first step.