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Naked Autumn Trees

Seeds- Root-Trunk-Branches –
soft feathery leaves
raindrops
small still
Spell bound nudity,
I am the autumn tree
lanky trunk
in cold winters breeze
I freeze...

My bark -like thin skin
tightens---
the warmth within me
I ought to contain
Autumns will come again and again
but for many years
I have to sustain...

My multi colorful leaves
strewn across the fields
still remember me as a mother tree
now stark bare and nude
but still lovely
why has it, its kids now abandoned.
lonely isolated leaves do wonder.

Out in the whiteness of snow
now I stand naked all alone
hoping spring will spring- soon enough
to re-clothe me

I will face many more autumns similarly
so friends abide with me
I stand stark naked
nude yet so lovely
all come to admire me
not birds only...

About This Poem

Last Few Words: PURE IMAGERY

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 12 months ago

"I think...

that I shall never see, a poem as lovedly as a tree"

Trees are the lungs of the world
the home of birds and the little squirrel
A bare tree, without its' cloak or dress
is like a love and tenderness.
~ Geez.
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Geezer

Geezer

2 years 12 months ago

Absolutely!...

Of course, it's friendly! A kindness, if you take it that way! You're always my friend ~ Geez.
..

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 12 months ago

thanks CATS

Not seen you lately hope you are well
the poem has been appreciated by many
YOUR KINDNESS

Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 12 months ago

I dig it

The more I hang around and get a feel for everyone and their specific styles the more I enjoy these reads. This one is really well thought out and conveys your idea pretty flawlessly.

Really great idea, good execution,
Tim

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 12 months ago

you are wonderful

I have 7 decades experience only off the cuff poetry poet readers like you are friendly thanks be alongside me keep reading-