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Aug 05, 2022
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My Love, My Rotting Leaves... Part #2
Witch doctor Mumbo-Jumbo
is pretty good I hear
He's filled the air with magic
and drunk a case of beer
Chicken feet are burning
Man, there's quite the stench
I swig a nasty beer
my thirst, it doesn't quench
Now, the haze of Ganja
makes my eyes turn red
I see her body twitch
soon, she will be undead!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Carrie's up next, then Tim.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 years 11 months ago
shouldn't this
be posted under my part #2?
Geezer
2 years 11 months ago
Yeah...
but now I'm having issues with my computer. it wouldn't let me even comment. [kept telling me it couldn't access them! So I posted a separate one.
Candlewitch
2 years 11 months ago
do you...
want me to cut and paste it into my comments?
*hugs, Cat
RoseBlack
2 years 11 months ago
This is fantastic
Mine will probably come either tonight or tomorrow morning. Work rest of the day today and groceries but will have some time later and tomorrow at my other job