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Aug 09, 2022
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Cant say his or hers
Waking life and dream state are the same dare not wish but i must because i gave this person nothing but blame, situation, confusion, saved from tragedy but not the illusion.
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Last Few Words: Upon a time outside the gate
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"Not the illusion" is a
"Not the illusion" is a multiple revision on words