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Aug 12, 2022
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Buddha Says
Life is but a choice
Laundering dirty money
Or doing laundry
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Haiku
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 10 months ago
Buddha Says
Hello, Sen,
Very clever, great structure, and a wonderful philosophy! Very wise!
Thank you,
L
Sen99
2 years 10 months ago
Lavender Laundry awaits you
Hi thanks kind comment, have a great day
lovedly
2 years 10 months ago
did you mean BUDDHA SAID
Now hear me
LOVEDLY SAYS
Have a wife
enjoy life
as and when
else marry strife
in lieu of women
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 10 months ago
Impressive
This is a very original idea. It’s inspiring and I’d like to use this concept as a part of my individual growth. I’ve been doing laundry forever and I’ll continue to do so.
Well done,
Tim
Sen99
2 years 10 months ago
Keep Doing Laundry
Hi thanks glad it resonated with you, its nice to inspire someone else