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Aug 15, 2022
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LET IT RAIN WITHIN
Well when it rains
it brings fortune
it reigns all over
in harmony and tune
let the spurt come again
soon
Ah it rains again
for me and you
perhaps your hands will now be
clamped by your beau
About This Poem
Last Few Words: LIGHTER VEIN OF rain
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Chiori
2 years 11 months ago
I believe you are also
I believe you are also experiencing massive downpour over there, for days now we have not seen the sun, who now his whereabouts, but my clothes lying there just waiting for the sun
Lavender
2 years 11 months ago
LET IT RAIN WITHIN
Hi, Lovedly!
Catchy play on words! Refreshing and sweet!
Thank you,
L
lovedly
2 years 11 months ago
When it rains we go fishing
may be able to spend rainy times fishing/angling thanks for the sweetness
fish we love when salty lol