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Ward C

If you ever go looking around for me

You will find me in a bed in Ward C

A cold feather pillow under my head

Made up of feathers of a bird long dead

Across my body are straps to hold me down

Gag over my mouth so I cannot make a sound

In a bed across from me is a man wearing white

Talks to himself all day and all through the night

They are going to come and take me away soon

Put me in a clean hard bed in my own private room

They will put a long sharp skinny needle in my arm

To keep me from causing myself or anyone any harm

They say that I will slowly and gently fall into a sleep

There will be no one there that is going to weep

They will bury me on a bank where a river use to flow

A place where no flowers will ever again grow

I hope to awake where there is honey and there is wine

So I can quit living inside of my painful mind

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Southwest United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allen Poe, Jim Morrison, Sylvia Plath

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Comments

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 11 months ago

A personal and brave write

Well written and honest depiction of what a hospitalization feels like to the patient. Thank you for sharing these parts of you with us.

Depressed 1

Depressed 1

2 years 11 months ago

Thanks

Thanks RoseBlack. It is the only way not to bottle things up inside.

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 11 months ago

dear Depressed 1

you forgot to tell about the nurses and Dr.'s who routinely ignore you and are indifferent to your pain...

a very good poem that speaks to and addresses our level of medical care, or lack of!!!

*hugs, Cat

Depressed 1

Depressed 1

2 years 11 months ago

Thanks

Thanks Cat. The Dr.'s are who strapped him to the table and put him to everlasting sleep.

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 11 months ago

Am I...

the only one who thought this might be about someone being executed? ~ Geezer.
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Depressed 1

Depressed 1

2 years 11 months ago

Yes

That was the thought when I was writing it.

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 11 months ago

Ward C

Hello!
I see that this is a sensitive subject for you. It is very well written, especially in first person. I feel so many things from this, and like Geezer, it feels like someone's final day(s).
Peace,
Lavender