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Aug 19, 2022
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An autumn leaf
Be not alone
all are lonely,
somewhere in the vastness of eternity
someone calls out instantly
still we say wait
time hasn't come yet
then the loneliness vanishes
the unknown comes in one’s dreams
and screams
where have you been
are you now asking
an autumn leaf
the invisible one smiles alongside
now 'tis autumn
there is no surprise
hope you too will be
some day
flying about
side beside
Ah an autumn leaf falls
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 10 months ago
Autumn leaves...
are sure to fall, but I'm not worried yet. I didn't learn my lesson from the grasshopper that played all summer and didn't put anything away like the ants. I'm going to play all the rest of the summer. Humph! People talking about fall already! Yeah, I love Halloween too! But we still have at least 5-6 weeks before fall. Summmmmmmeer, going out in your shirtsleeves, shorts and sandals, [no socks]! Ugh! Not having to struggle into those heavy coats and boots! WTF is wrong with you people!? ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 10 months ago
WTF is wrong with you people!? ~ Geez. .
WHY Such a Rage
from sweet sugar mouthed as always
Gee .
Something wrong with me
may be .
I often compose poems all about autumn
once compared an autumn tree with a woman
many liked it
Perhaps you did too
Relax Autumn will creep in slowly as squirrels do in my back yard and public garden
Till then excuse me
Geez
Geezer
2 years 10 months ago
I was...
being what I thought, funny in a sarcastic way. I never meant for you to take it seriously! I still love lovedly.
Sheesh! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 10 months ago
folks born on 5th of a month are
normally sarcastic
But u r not
anyway I love to read your views
it is like renovating my mind
afresh look at a colorful strewn leaf
may not be autumn's
Gee
Triskelion
2 years 10 months ago
Your writing
always puts me in the moment, lovedly. Although I care less for free verse, all of your writing carries that same quality that continues to intrigue and inspire me.
lovedly
2 years 10 months ago
Intrigue inspire
quality is what one wants entire
I only endeavor
Triskelion
2 years 10 months ago
Is it not enough...
to know that your writing inspires? It's live in the moment quality and eclectic arrangement is like shards of crystal thoughts of endless colours. When I read your work, it expands the horizon of my own thoughts.
Anyway, skill and quality isn't really appreciated any more. Appreciation for most readers nowadays is choresome and tedious.
Thomas
lovedly
2 years 10 months ago
Hi Tri
your analysis thrills me kind thanks do appreciate all not only me...
an autumn leaf last year's
now buried in clay......