Expressions

Write the colours of your life
Write to escape the chains that bind
Feel the rhythm to your beat!
Unleash the light that shines within
Brightly burning like a white candle
The untouched flame
With no one to blame.

Write the colours of your life
Own your life and be in control!
Feel the sunshine on your face
See the rainbow as it graced
Dance to the beat of your own melody
Free your soul and escape!
Release the pains into the wind
Taste the healing medicine of forgiveness
Write the story of your life.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: How can this piece be improved if needs be? Thank you all for sharing a comment.

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: South Zone

Favorite Poets: Maya Angelou, Beau Taplin, Nelson Mandela, William Shakespeare, Lucy Maud Montgomery

Comments

Geezer

2 years 10 months ago

I see the...

the bold idea that one can and should be in control of their life.
That you shouldn't hide your light beneath a basket, and forget that
life is a journey that should be colored by your own brush.
Not having any ideas about how to improve on this, I will say that
you have done well. ~ Geezer.
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