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Aug 23, 2022
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Islands
You may be an island all alone
in a tumultuous, unforgiving ocean
If that's true,
you're also a mountain
refusing to yield
to the unrelenting sea.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Something I wrote six years ago (according to my social media). My mountain has trees now, as life returns.
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 10 months ago
Just what...
life ordered. A different perspective! ~ Geez.
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Jackweb
2 years 10 months ago
Wow!
Deeply thoughtful piece! The 'mountain', 'Ocean', 'Sea', this is a strong imagery!
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RoseBlack
2 years 10 months ago
A great perspective
Even though one may be alone, they are still strong! Great job!