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My trip Down Memory Lane

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The Music

The Sound
The Feel
The Beat
The Lyrics
The Guitars
The Drums
The Band
The Engineer
The lights
The Air
The Smell
The Fans
The Venue
The drinks
The Music

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I wrote this about Music and how it feels to be a musician on stage playing in a band.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Australia, AUS

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Comments

RoseBlack

RoseBlack

2 years 9 months ago

My happy place

Because of all those things...makes the hair on my arms stand up. The only place I can be myself!

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Lavender

Lavender

2 years 9 months ago

The Music

Hello, Herbert,
Yes...to all of this! There is nothing like live music, no matter which way you are facing the stage. Even though this is a poem about memories, I hope you continue to play on stage, if possible!
Thank you!
Lavender

Triskelion

Triskelion

2 years 9 months ago

This is

a good start. If you're looking for constructive criticism, it's something that could be expanded on. Right now it reads like a grocery list.
The bread
The milk
The butter
The cheese
The eggs
etc...
Nothing there for me at all....well, maybe the cheese.

Thomas