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Far distant as in Life is death

Saturn is defined
by distance from earth
farthest...

rare occurrences
are defined by Saturn...
planet assigned to death
more sadness
illness
cancer
once in a way

life is else
happiness
most of the time
births
happy birthdays many

weddings of children
flowers and ornaments
sugar pastries.......

Grief comes
after many a years
It has to
be fatal
serious illness and debt
are inevitable

rest most chocolates
poets of whom
you are the tastiest

enjoy being on NEO
all poets you

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Lavender

Lavender

2 years 10 months ago

Far distant as in Life is Death

Hi, Lovedly,
Poor Saturn. A gritty look at what is inevitable - illness, grief, debt, mixed in with weddings and flowers...and sugar pastries! Life and poetry, intertwined.
Thank you!
L

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 10 months ago

AND

LAV kind thanks life is more of happiness
grief laced as tapestry