Naive Or Unassuming!

Reversioned poetry

Naïve or Unassuming!

A great deal
For your everlasting and solid support
As always,
albeit I impose positivity
In all human beings
I at times portray a default
though it may just be
An act of lack of wisdom

And

As they always said
Naivety meaning stupidity
but I learned as time lapsed
ere I really collapsed
I became unassuming
Slightly a shade better
Than being gloomy

About This Poem

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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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loved

14 years 7 months ago

Revisited poetry NAIVE ME!

Naïve idiot means Unassuming!

Thanks
A great deal
For your everlasting and solid support
As always
Albeit
I impose positivity
In all human beings
I at times I do portray a default
Though it may just be
An act of lack of wisdom
I thought

And

As they always said
Naivety
Really meaning
Stupidity

But I learned
As time lapsed
Ere
I really collapsed

I became unassuming
Slightly a shade better
Than being a subject
Only worth consuming!
Blasphemy crafted irony!

loved

14 years 7 months ago

naive revisited

Naïve idiot means Unassuming!

And

As they always said
Naivety
Really meaning
Stupidity

But I learned
As time lapsed
Ere
I really collapsed

I became unassuming
Slightly a shade better
Than being a subject
Only worth consuming!
Blasphemy crafted irony!

scribbler

14 years 7 months ago

naive

There are many who would prefer being overlooked rather than risking ridicule for their opinions. You stated this very well in your poem......scribbler