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Sep 14, 2022
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Drifting day by day
We lift our
errant eyes
waking up
to the blissful
bluebird skies.
Where there
dawns
another day
faintly
flickering
itself away .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
2 years 9 months ago
Drifting Day by Day
Hello, Edward,
So gentle, peaceful, and calm. I know you are usually inspired by music. Is that the case with this?
Thank you,
L
Edward nigma
2 years 9 months ago
Yes it is my inspiration
https://youtu.be/f2cKAbqWMLg
The song gave me the idea
of how one day fades then bleeds back into another but I know wouldn’t last forever so you better enjoy each day to the fullest because don’t know when your final day will fade.
Lavender
2 years 9 months ago
Beautiful!
Precious.
Thank you,
L
Geezer
2 years 9 months ago
How true...
you never know. I like the thought process here. Nice job! ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
2 years 9 months ago
Thank you
I try to give my advice or feelings thoughts within the form of my poems hoping it would build up an impact and be remembered . And I try to write it sincerely because it’s what I believe is the truth. Thank you geezer .