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Sep 19, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week Contest September 18 to September 24th 2022 Winner
A stranger
A stranger
In the venue where we met
I saw a stranger in the black.
I saw his eyes,
They were like ice.
I heard his voice,
It wasn’t noise.
I saw the wings on his back
And blood on his neck…
You could think I am a liar,
But I am sure it was a vampire!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Once again it is autumn and Halloween inspiration.
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
RoseBlack
2 years 9 months ago
A fun write
Beware of those vampires! They could be anywhere!
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Anna Severchuk
2 years 9 months ago
Thank you,Mark!
Thank you,Mark!
Geezer
2 years 9 months ago
It is the time...
for the beasts in us... to come forth, to be scared of what we see in ourselves. I truly believe that the nightmares that we write about, are the things we fear reside in us! Good job of scaring us with that. ~ Geezer.
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Anna Severchuk
2 years 9 months ago
Or we are just inspired by
Or we are just inspired by the mystery and weather...
Jackweb
2 years 9 months ago
Terrified!
The poem drops a visual imagery with a fearful scenerio.
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Administrative…
2 years 9 months ago
Congratulations
Great creation, Anna, and well deserving weekly choice selection.
Mark
Anna Severchuk
2 years 9 months ago
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!