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Sep 25, 2022
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the sun
people are so fickle and changeable emotional
the only things you can depend on are the sun rocks
ocean and mountains religion also a stabilizer
your wife the time math which goes forever and gravity
laws of physics
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
victor dyck
2 years 9 months ago
analyses
poetry is concentrated truth like orange juice concentrate
alot like the laws of physics
Geezer
2 years 9 months ago
Seems to me...
that this is just a quotation, an unfinished poem, a statement. If you are going to let it stand as a work, you should at least comma-tize your list. ~ Geezer.
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