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That's right, there are no leftists here
they've left to make things right
but first they drank up all the beer
and all the wine in sight
The right wingers all fell from the sky
at least the few still left
they fell with a joyful cry
their perfect smiles all cleft
Progressive, they all shifted gears
and went into reverse
while ridiculing brave men's fears
in long speeches which were terse
Which left the Luddites breaking ground
with new technology
making them laugh each time they frowned
in perfect synchronousity
The socialist sits all alone
he shuns all company
all he does is piss and moan
about his lost destiny
the anarchists all formed a club
in a quest for forming order
they all agreed that the real rub
is forming a country with no border
Of course the communists agree
they're better than the rest
you'd think the only truth they see
is found by beating their scrawny chests
i guess that leaves just you and me
to remain unlabeled
for now I'll gladly agree
to leave that motion tabled
Just some nonsense
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
CCfire
14 years 3 months ago
You drink bees?
lol A slight typo there I believe..I am sure beer is much safer...nice poem here.
scribbler
14 years 3 months ago
LOL
Most who do drink it to get a buzz. No matter how many times I preview a write, I still manage to see what I mean instead of what is there . thanks for the heads up and time to read and comment................scribbler
raj
14 years 3 months ago
Dear Stan..
i liked that nonsensical poem ..a run through the political isms...with a good ending ..
i guess that leaves just you and me
to remain unlabeled
for now I'll gladly agree
to leave that motion tabled
scribbler
14 years 3 months ago
hello
Sometimes it's just fun to play with words lol. Good of you to visit and glad you liked this...............stan
Roscoe Lane
14 years 3 months ago
Well put sir,
Well put sir, fun to play with words as we do, and as you do so cleverly brilliant. Regards Roscoe..
scribbler
14 years 3 months ago
hi Roscoe
Glad you enjoyed it..............................scribbler
scribbler
14 years 3 months ago
Hi Shirl
did you mean dizzy or ditzy lol. Always nice to see you drop by..................stan