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Oct 04, 2022
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New Poets (Neopoet Around The World Anthology Contest)
Immerse yourself into this realm of poetry -
move within the rhythm
play with the rhyme
dissect each pause and period
study the style, form, and structure
dissolve into what you read
absorb and ingest its energy
While here, you shall meet poets -
dreamers, realists
sages, discoverers
protesters, peacemakers
messengers of a world
unpolished and bold
Lovers of the written word
voices of the spoken word
travelers in the passionate
paradise of verse and rhyme
Immerse yourself into
a thousand words of wonder
imagined by a myriad of
wanderers and their words -
the poets and their poems.
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 8 months ago
I quit
Uncle. You win.
Tim
Lavender
2 years 8 months ago
Hi, Tim,
Thank you for reading, Tim. The subject matter for this particular contest seems very dear to all of us!
Best regards to you!
L
Jackweb
2 years 8 months ago
Wow
This is a mesmerizing word dribble!
Beautiful!
.
Lavender
2 years 8 months ago
Hello, Jackweb,
Thank you for your kind words!
L
Jackweb
2 years 8 months ago
You're welcome
Once again, beautiful poetry!
.
RoseBlack
2 years 8 months ago
Well done...
Sums up the Neopoet experience beautifully.
Lavender
2 years 8 months ago
Hello, RoseBlack,
Thank you very much! Certainly how I view Neo!
L
lovedly
2 years 8 months ago
and my normal inquiry
where do I fit in
lol
no butter please
as Neos need to improve
belt me you may
madam LAV
Lavender
2 years 8 months ago
Hello, Lovedly,
There is no other poetry like Lovedly's! You own your own special place.
L
lovedly
2 years 7 months ago
I'm fainting thanks
heavens hold me
Lavender
2 years 7 months ago
Good morning, Mark,
Good suggestion - I had trouble choosing the correct description. I was going for something a little more passionate. I'll work on that word.
Thank you for your help!
L
RoseBlack
2 years 7 months ago
Great resource
Definitely going to check this out
Lavender
2 years 7 months ago
Thank you, Mark!
Yes, I refer to that great resource all the time!
Lavender
2 years 7 months ago
Hi, Mark,
Yes, that word didn't feel right. Your comments are very generous. Thank you for helping with this!
L
Ray Whitaker
2 years 7 months ago
A great poem here
I enjoyed this
Lavender
2 years 7 months ago
Hello, Ray,
Thank you very much!
L
Lavender
2 years 6 months ago
Thank you!
I feel very honored!
L
Geezer
2 years 5 months ago
I feel like...
such an ass! How did I miss this? I will have to plead my standby, a sick day! I'm glad that I didn't enter this contest, I don't think I could stand being whupped so badly! Holy Cow! You the man! ~ Geez.
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Lavender
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you, Geezer...
thank you very much!
L
Rula
2 years 5 months ago
Congratulations dear Lavender
Well merited indeed!
Well done!
Lavender
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you, Rula,
I am so touched and honored, and grateful to be among wise poets such as yourself!
L
RoseBlack
2 years 5 months ago
Congratulations
Well deserved. Could not be happier for you. Congratulations on such a fine achievement.
Lavender
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you, Carrie,
I appreciate your kind words, and all the support and lovely poetry you have shared!
L
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 5 months ago
Congratulations on the win!
Well deserved. You are a wonderful writer and an engaging member of the site. I think I speak for everyone when I say you are an indispensable asset to our community. Enjoy this recognition of your talent, it is well placed in great writer and a quality human.
Kudos,
Tim
Lavender
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you, Tim,
I am truly honored and appreciate your support and help. I feel blessed to share this love of poetry with you, and all the wonderful words and thoughts you gift to all of us!
L
Abby
2 years 5 months ago
Congrats on the win! This is
Congrats on the win! This is a wonderful poem, your win is well deserved.
Lavender
2 years 5 months ago
Hello, Abby,
Thank you for your support and enthusiasm, and for sharing your lovely poetry.
Best wishes for the New Year!
L
Jackweb
2 years 5 months ago
Wow!
Hearty Congratulations esteemed poet!
.
Lavender
2 years 5 months ago
Hello, Jackweb,
Truly, truly an honor. I appreciate your support and never-ending enthusiasm for poetry!
Thank you!
L
lovedly
2 years 5 months ago
I hope
all your poems find a luminous place
in the forthcoming NEO anthology
Lavender
2 years 5 months ago
Hello, Lovedly,
Thank you for always giving encouragement and sharing your generous love of poetry.
Lav
lovedly
2 years 5 months ago
I love to smile
I love to smile
firstly at myself mostly
makes all happy Lav
Poets Hand
2 years 4 months ago
Is This What I do
Is this what I do when critiquing a poem. Ah I see. There is a whole world out there.
Thanks for the guidance, the insights the invitation and the dressage.
This is a fantastic introduction to poetry.
Beautiful words
Poets Hand
Hannah
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
Why, thank you, Hannah!
What a lovely critique, and I am so grateful that you took the time to visit and read!
Lavender
Poets Hand
2 years 4 months ago
Poetry around the world
Thanks. If only you knew how much you are teaching me by having inspiring poems at my fingertips.
Poets Hand
Hannah
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
There is something to learn
every day from reading and sharing poetry. I am genuinely inspired by poets like you and others here.
L
Poets Hand
2 years 4 months ago
On the Learning Curve
Thank you so much
Poets Hand
Hannah