Rosewood Apothecary

Oct 12, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I wrote 4 poems in 30 minutes yesterday!!!

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S.A., USA

Favorite Poets: Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Walt Whitman. I’m enamored by the work of lyricists such as Robert Hunter, John Barlow, John Dyer Baizley, and Tom Marshall just to name a handful.

Comments

Lavender

2 years 9 months ago

We Drink of Stars

Hello, Tim,
A peaceful celestial experience. Quiet and calm, but luminous, too. Beautiful title - a feeling of intimacy and deep connection. Hopeful and bold!
Thank you!
L

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 9 months ago

It was

A peaceful write. First of three I did in one very quick sitting. I’ll see you tomorrow?

Tim

Lavender

2 years 9 months ago

Hi, Tim,

Absolutely!
L

RoseBlack

2 years 9 months ago

Intimacy at its finest

I enjoyed the connection between connecting on an intimate level and celestial experiences. Well done!

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Oh Tim

Double post

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Oh Tim

This is pure bliss. I'm sitting here at my desk and looking up I can see thousands of stars out of the big window in front of me. When I am lost or feeling alone, they can make me feel whole again.

We love magic in our lives and all we have to do is look up or in. It's right above us or in us.

Bravo. This is a masterpiece applause.

Kind regards Jayne

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

dear Tim

like you, your writings are amazing! you open up new doors and vistas for me, thank you!

*love, Cat