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Oct 20, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week October 16th to October 22 2022
Poem without a Verb
3 lines almost too long
for the attention span
of an excited gnat
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 9 months ago
A kind of...
weird thought, that invited me in and gave me pause.
Not earth-shaking, but just weird, it made me ponder,
like WTH is he thinking? Anyway, it made me smile to think
that you and I had connected; you, thinking about writing it
and me thinking; WTH is he thinking? LoL
~ Geezer.
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Sen99
2 years 9 months ago
We've had too much to think
just food for thought, a small snack for your brain to chew over, glad you smiled ))
Lavender
2 years 9 months ago
Poem Without a Verb
Hello, Sen,
Very nice! You've captured action, motion and movement.
Thank you!
Lavender
Sen99
2 years 9 months ago
Thanks Lavender
3 lines the of the toughest I've had to write !