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Oct 20, 2022
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vanity's sanity
my vanity stares at me,
i stare back,
through the glass, it is confined in.
i mouth to my vanity,
'you lack the freedom that i, myself, have to roam this reality,'
mouthing back to me.
my vanity is lovelier,
my vanity is more kept.
confined it understands,
the sanity in my vanity,
i vow to protect.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: i miss writing
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Mr joghe
2 years 8 months ago
Hello!
Hello!
You are communicating with vanity means you're sane. It happened in some cases when poet is trying to figure out mysteries.
Does your vanities make you sane?
Don't the cloudy thought to suppress you.
Check the 'i' it should be 'I'