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Anna Severchuk
Anna Severchuk
Oct 29, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
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What do you feel

what you feel when you are free?
is it sparkle of a glee?
is it something you can smell?
or it’s some kind of spell?
can you feel a wind inside
let it wonder through your mind?
let the sun cover your face
dreams just running their pace
In your blood the calm of sea
have no borders just let be
feeling free to choose your way
life is game you can play

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Odessa,Ukraine, UKR

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Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 8 months ago

Some quick corrections

what do you feel when you are free?
is it a sparkle of a glee?
is it something you can smell?
or it is some kind of spell?
can you feel a wind inside
let it wonder through your mind?
let the sun cover your face
dreams are just running their pace
In your blood the calm of sea
have no borders just let be
feeling free to choose your way
life’s a game and you can play

This is a perfect write. It’s quick it rhymes it’s got great rhythm,
Tim

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 8 months ago

What Do You Feel

Hello, Anna,
I see from your profile page you are from Ukraine. I cannot find the words to describe how your poem makes me feel. It is like a song.
My warmest regards,
Lavender