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Oct 29, 2022
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Sullen silken star
Stiffly staring
from a faded
frightened far
is a sullen
silken star .
Scornfully
scattered behind
it’s skittish
skin of scolded
scowling scars.
Youthfully
yearning
For a life
contentedly
cleansed in
candlelight .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
2 years 8 months ago
lovely S 'sssss
sullen
silken star .
scornfully
scattered (behind)
skittish
skins scolded
scowling
scars.
Edward nigma
2 years 8 months ago
My inspiration
My inspiration was
https://youtu.be/vLGK_SHMTEk