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Becoming
Dress my drumming frost covered heart
In the bones of old oak and maple and birch
Take me outside for wet autumn walk
Although it’s myself who’s the subject of search
The rains are taking down with them the leaves
Soon the cold snow will garnish the scene
Here I stand drinking the draught of it all
Wondering what it could possibly mean
There are beautiful things a person can know
Some secrets though, can never be found
While others require the seeker to lift
Their gaze to the sky and away from the ground
Whenever I’m out there I always find me
Or rather the forests will welcome me home
The friendships I’ve cultured with fern, rock and tree
Have cultured the very man I’ve become
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Michael Keens
2 years 8 months ago
wow. deep. Reminds me of
wow. deep. Reminds me of Vivaldi four seasons, mixed with human emotion
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 8 months ago
That’s high praise
Good piece of classical music. Pretty nice to be compared to that in any context.
Thanks
Tim
Lavender
2 years 8 months ago
Becoming
Hello, Tim,
"...the forests will welcome me home."
Beautiful and always true.
L
lovedly
2 years 8 months ago
I am now noticing
all Neos are only praising
main kickers have gone
since long
no football kicking
no machine gunning ....poetry
jess must be scowling
heavenly
go see clouds
must be bursting