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Rula
Rula
Nov 06, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoet Around The Globe Anthology Contest.

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The Niche (Around The Global Anthology Contest)

Nick the time 'n pick up a chair
Each with a master-piece to share
Open with minds, and arms, and hearts
Poets of talents, show out their arts
Old or young, you'll find a place
Eager for words; mighty and grace;
Touring around the global space

About This Poem

Last Few Words: An acrostic rhyming form

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

Rula

Rula

2 years 7 months ago

Obi!

Always great to see an old friend on my page.
Much appreciate the visit.

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 7 months ago

The Niche

I agree, Rula. Well done. This covers it all. Wonderfully clever, too.
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Rula

Rula

2 years 7 months ago

Dearest Lavender

Such a compliment from atalented poetess. Highly appreciate it dear.

Rula

Rula

2 years 7 months ago

Hello Mark

Thank you for the time and your invaluable thoughts.
As for "niche", it has so many good meanings to it and I thought all are good ones and from the context I also thought it's clear I wanted a special space, a shelter if you want. I wonder what other meanings might the reader get in such a content.

Your thoughts?

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 7 months ago

I love...

acrostic type of poem. Nice job, until the last line. I would opt for "Touring over tomorrow's plan." It makes sense because of looking over tomorrow's plan, you can see where you are going. ~ Geezer.
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Rula

Rula

2 years 7 months ago

Thank you Geezer

I am thinking over that the last line and the title as well.
Much appreciate your thoughts.

Rula

Rula

2 years 7 months ago

Please let me know

If the edits work.
Do I still need to change the word niche in the title after explaining it in the last line what I am talking about.
I'm falling in love with this word^_^

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 7 months ago

Remember...

It's Neo-poet! You might get woosy if it's Neopot! LoL
No, I think you are fine, with the niche in the title, but it's up to you. ~ Geezer.
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Rula

Rula

2 years 7 months ago

Lol

Thank you Geezer.
Appreciate the quick response and the heads up!