AUTUMN...2022

Autumn comes to all living beings
including animals birds and bees...
albeit timed differently,

but season's autumns
are more or less
timed
this year's autumn was different
it missed time...

winter came around
rather suddenly
after a while autumn
again took over the siege

hear me
just let me play
with my colorful leaves
let me enlighten thee...

I am autumn
know all ye

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

lovedly

2 years 8 months ago

so nice of you Mark

your visit was a delight
thanks
do hope ya'll come
more often

Geezer

2 years 8 months ago

Autumn is hanging in there. I wouldn't mind if it hung around for a while yet. I see you playing with the colors of Fall, you are dressed in yellows and oranges, and spreading cheer all around. Not your usual somber mood! Nice work! ~ Geez.
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lovedly

2 years 8 months ago

Not your usual somber mood! ...Nice work! ~ Geez.

Not your usual ''somber ''mood! Nice work! ~ Geez.
O NO I get misunderstood
not my fault
ONE ----A NON ENGLISH GUY WAS ASKED ....
WHAT HE UNDERSTOOD
was meant as
''MISUNDERSTOOD ''
La la he laughed
no probs

....a miss standing under the bridge
waiting for him ....her's ah!

Lavender

2 years 8 months ago

Autumn...2022

Hello, Lovedly,
I recently read a short poem about "playing" - "...the real joy in life comes in its play." Which is in doing anything we love apart from profit, compulsion, or sense of duty. This poem affirms that feeling for me, remembering the animals, birds and bees. And the playfulness with the colorful leaves. I really like the final line - a great invitation: the best way to know fall, is to experience and play with it.
Thank you,
L