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Nov 21, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week Contest November 20th to 26th 2022
And the winner is....
And the Winner is....you,
who celebrated
the virgin morning's view
who selfishly snuggled
in its lew,
who bathed in its
holy sunshine,
and in all its
blessings
went through.
You,
who sniffed with its fairies
the freshly sprayed dew,
and in its mellifluous
baritone grew grew, grew.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 7 months ago
Mentally Mellifluous...
Very mellifluous and smooth idea. ~ Geezer.
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Rula
2 years 7 months ago
Thank you sir Gee
Your visit is highly appreciated.
Dystopia
2 years 7 months ago
I absolutely love this!!
I absolutely love this!! Wonderful work!
Rula
2 years 7 months ago
Dystopia
Thank you. My pleasure.
Appreciate your kind visit.