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Nov 25, 2022
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CHILL ALSO INSPIRES
Have lived in minus 35 degrees
winter
my it was
chill
as snow flakes
sheared my eyes
when I used to fetch my
GCS
My they were so
impressed
loved me
hugged me
of course 'em
I kissed
my then bent back
straightened up
what darn
chill!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: EVEN CHILL FLAMES HUMANS
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Triskelion
2 years 7 months ago
I once..
..darned my dang dungarees..the wind was whistling right through them. -35C...I almost said darn, but dang sang.
Thomas
lovedly
2 years 7 months ago
ha ha TRI
Tanks...thanxxxxxxxxxxxx lol
Triskelion
2 years 7 months ago
another chuckle for you
I'm darning my dang dungarees
for the horrible holes in the knees
though you might think it silly
but my willy gets chilly
when it hangs below zero degrees
Thomas
Triskelion
2 years 7 months ago
Or better this way?
I'm darning my dang dungarees
cuz it's gone below zero degrees
though you might think it silly
but my willy gets chilly
when it hangs through the hole in the knees
Thomas
lovedly
2 years 7 months ago
Yeah particularly when it's longish despite.............
but my willy gets chilly....