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Nov 27, 2022
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Fading with you
Back before
our first words
were spoken .
We’re all born
to be bashed
and broken.
Always left with
scars to mend .
As we dismally
dwindle down
towards the end .
Seeping through
each passing day
searching for a
fading friend
to stay .
While our lives
bashfully blow
away .
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Lavender
2 years 7 months ago
Fading With You
Hello, Edward,
"...Seeping through each passing day, searching for a fading friend to stay." Remarkable unreserved poetry.
Thank you,
L