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Dec 04, 2022
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FRAGRANT VIBRATIONS
I can as all others
could or would do
spread fragrance
as you do
far and wide across the sunny horizon
lapping up the sounds of waves
in simple harmonic vibrations
your fragrance
shall spread
across many lands
bless the web
for communication
LAST ONE NO ONE READ SO MAY NOW
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/poems/fragrance-love
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Jackweb
2 years 7 months ago
Nice presentation!
I like the title of the poem. The rhythm, with a fine ending.Your letter pours down and your style enchanting. The clouds of rhetoric and beauty condense, so it showers us with an outpouring of your charming alphabet.
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lovedly
2 years 7 months ago
thanks
kindly
Lavender
2 years 7 months ago
Fragrant Vibrations
Hello, Lovedly,
Back in 1986, Hands Across America was held in the USA. 6 million people across the county joined hands in an attempt to unify the country to help the homeless and beat poverty. It was a pretty amazing feeling. This poem has that same wonderful intention.
Thank you!
Lav
lovedly
2 years 7 months ago
NOSTALGIC
How so sweet and kind of you
to make such a wonderful
comparison
thank you
Lav
MA'AM
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 7 months ago
You certainly do
It’s come to smell your fragrant words, unique and just ambiguous enough to properly ponder.
Tim