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Dec 06, 2022
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SILENCE THREAT
a sophisticated silence
scuttled away my peace
pierced my giant hope
I am now a living danger
planted in the sands of time
©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu
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Lavender
2 years 7 months ago
Silence Threat
Hi, Jackweb,
I find this to be very stirring. One of your best!
Peace to you,
L
Jackweb
2 years 7 months ago
I'm
Always thankful for stopping by.
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Geezer
2 years 7 months ago
I sincerely hope...
that your life isn't in danger because of your political views. Nice work, it makes one reflect on our world and the dangers of speaking out in some countries. Stay safe. ~ Geez.
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Jackweb
2 years 7 months ago
I'm
Always thankful for stopping by. I'm save Gee ...
.thank you all!
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