CIRCLE HULLA BALLOO MY VIEW

I dare to disagree
yes life goes in circles
each circle starts with a beginning
then it comes back to the same point

Being a scientist
I must add on
circles are round
the sun being static
other planets going around
anti cycle
meaning
NOT CLOCKWISE

All wonder how and why
Well a simple answer
folks don't understand
all existence is magnetic
without it we would never ever exist
be it human animal or planet

then there would have been
NO CIRCLES
Hope you hear me
motions come and go in
cyclic order only

Believe you me
LIFE IS ONLY CIRCULAR

The Neos also go around each
circling ....

About This Poem

Last Few Words: INSPIRED BY RAY

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Jackweb

2 years 6 months ago

Wow

I can agree that a life cycle is a series of stages a living thing goes through during it's life. All plants and animals go through life cycles. Woven with artistic beauty!
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M4GG0TM3NT4L

2 years 6 months ago

huh,

interesting take! i like the imagery, the use of captilization is also pretty nice :)

M4GG0TM3NT4L

2 years 6 months ago

also i think the title is

also i think the title is funny which is always a bonus

Lavender

2 years 6 months ago

Circle Hulla Balloo

Hello, Lovedly,
The fascinating circle of life - pretty amazing. All things are truly related and interlaced within one another. Very nice!
Lav

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 6 months ago

Especially for Lovedly

Ouroboros

I am the birth of all tomorrows
The serpentine ouroboros
Wyvern eating it’s own tail
This transmigration of the soul

All things die must be reborn
In palingenesis of morn
Metempsychosis beyond death
Now reincarnate with this breath

Endless cycles, ancient snake
Devours itself for it’s own sake
Rain to rivers flow to seas
Rise to clouds which rain on me

lovedly

2 years 6 months ago

very good

you speak of REINCARNATION of life
but in another form ----no link to last one
at all

Hulllalllalllaa ballooo my view ...lol

Triskelion

2 years 6 months ago

But the sun is not static. A line can only return to a point relative to another point, as it is truly in a different place relative to the universe, physically and in time. We all are time travellers! Isn't it wonderful?!

Thomas