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Lady...

a piece of
the Celestial Mother
prevalent
in all womankind
the precious spark
you'll always find
in her lucent face
mistress moon
she is one with
her daughters
flowing
with the waters
of life
like creamy jade
she shall be
my muse
from now
until I fade.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more.

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 7 months ago

Nice stuff...

Like Tim, I can't find a thing that I would change. ~ Geez.
.

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 7 months ago

Lady...

Hi, Cat,
I agree. This is pure and beautiful.
L

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 7 months ago

:)

* many hugs and much love, Cat

Rula

Rula

2 years 7 months ago

The

music through out along with the language used , wow.
Just my cup of tea dear Cat!

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 7 months ago

good

but Gee calls my FREESTYLE
amateurish
SAD NO
Cats

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 7 months ago

Indeed...

he has my respect, but writes with so many innuendos and euphemisms, that he finds it hard to accept that some do not.
He thinks that I consider him amateurish, when I feel he is anything but. Sometimes, I wish he would write with a little more clarity, but beyond that... ~ Geez.

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 7 months ago

yes,

I do understand what you are saying and I agree with you. I cannot say it any better than you have done.

*hugs+, Cat

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 7 months ago

Cats you are really a nice frendly Lady

and
Gee the best friend I have ever had
I respect both
do tell him

Worthy of frankness and admiration
My poeming is like admixture of thoughts
one too many
glad you both like me
Thanks

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 7 months ago

I'm pretty sure...

he already knows how you feel about him and I believe the respect is mutual, dear lovedly.

*many hugs, Cat

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 7 months ago

yes ma'am

when if ever I revisit USA
I shall make it a point to bow to him

Its difficult in this world today to find
a good Lady like you
and a GENTLEMAN
like Gee

If only I can fly again
age smartens me
today I am
tomorrow time alone could tell
No one is as blessed
like me
TO BELL a cat

(so I speak in riddles mainly)

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 6 months ago

thank you

dearest lovedly. the Bell is a sacred tool and one of my favorite things...*ring the bell, close the book, quench the candle

*love, Cat

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 6 months ago

THEN SAY

Amen
and
ASK
for whom the bell
TOLLS

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 6 months ago

dear Lovedly,

not "amen" (for it is a Wiccan/Pagan thing) say "Blessed Be"

*hugs & love, Cat

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 6 months ago

OKAY Cats

so be it
as u say
cross out xxxxamenxxxx

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 6 months ago

:)

:)
thank you, luminous being of kindness

*love, Cat

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 6 months ago

thank you, luminous being of kindness

I already said
YOU ARE A TRUE LADY
an accomplished mature one

God bless thee
I'm an insignificant ant
smaller than a grain of
Atlantic sand
but even elephants
hold me with high regards
kindness ma'am