The Blessed One

How I'm blessed today, what 'bout you
Are you blessed too
Has the sun shone
Onto your throne

Have you woken up safe and sound
With health you're crowned
Are you to sing
what spring would bring

Then, you are free;
the king to be
You're the man
Of all times' span.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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2 years 6 months ago

Hello, Rula,
Wise sentiments. Well said, and perfect title!
Happy New Year to you!
L

2 years 6 months ago

Maybe it felt a bit Hallmarky?
I thought I'd post it anyway.
Thank you for coming to this.

2 years 6 months ago

It’s gorgeous, of course I am a sentimental being. One correction:

Have you waken up safe and sound

waken should be woken.

Other than that it’s perfect,
Tim

2 years 6 months ago

Thank you twice and million times for the kind visit and especially for the head ups.

2 years 6 months ago

I think it is fun and light. a little cheer never hurt anyone!

*love, Cat

2 years 6 months ago

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you to Rula