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Jan 06, 2023
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Pills Doc.....title edit
I recall a doc told an old
half blind lady
one white
morning pill
red at night after dinner
and
yellow green and blue
together at lunch
for your pee loo and poo...
well doc that's okay
doc
but just tell how
will they know
where to and when go
lol
About This Poem
Last Few Words: ALL FOR HUMOR FOR A DYING PERSON
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 6 months ago
Symptom management
My amazing grandparents (maternal) are still motoring along in their 80’s. They take a rainbow of assorted medications daily to manage all the different challenges. All in all they’re still independent though we are coming to the end of that and the family really needs to get together and have a plan for their care. Their youngest daughter is local and my sister and I are still around too so I feel like that will be our job to help out with that. We all have a good amount of humor surrounding it, them included. It’s a strange and wonderful dream, this life. Many aren’t so lucky to make 80 years old even if it’s with the aid of a multi colored galaxy of pills.
Tim
lovedly
2 years 6 months ago
hahaha
I'M 83 PLUS kicked all my pills now NO BILLS KIDS TAKE turn to keep us from making ILL
SaVe them medical bills
lol
Good ur ole guys have u around TIM
Geezer
2 years 6 months ago
I'm sure that...
the pills can figure out about where to go, after all,
there are only two directions. Thanks for the little bit of joviality, I needed it this morning. ~ Geez.
.
lovedly
2 years 6 months ago
ha ha Gee
everything goes to the stomach then as liquid into the blood stream drugs find their victims eat em and vainish
next PILL Please..
another witty one awaits thee
O GEE
smile will ye
Geezer
2 years 6 months ago
I'm smiling...
You always can make me smile. Your statement of "drugs find their victims, eat 'em and vanish" is oh so true! Waiting for the next one. ~ Geez.
.
lovedly
2 years 6 months ago
YOU GEE
SMILED WITH me
lol
now pal
Lavender
2 years 6 months ago
Pills Doc
Hi, Lovedly,
Clever and witty! Love it.
Lav
lovedly
2 years 6 months ago
yeah
at times poets ought to make their readers smile most say readers must cry emotional warfare ha ha
lol
thanks Lav