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Jan 07, 2023
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The Best Present
Listen children and hear me well
Christmas is the time to tell
Your parents what it really takes
Not bicycles or shining skates
Not trees nor wrappings or throw away things
Nor cards or letters that the postman brings
We all know what to tell
What really dings a big big bell
It’s the time we spend the time we take
To prove our love and more to make
It’s peace and laughter that we bring
To each new day and to each new thing
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 years 5 months ago
hello,
I really like your poem because it states what I believe. thank you for posting it. very eloquent.
*hugs, Cat
Clentin
2 years 5 months ago
Thank you very much. I
Thank you very much. I appreciate your comments. Please feel at ease to make remarks, or update or changes I should make. New at this!
Candlewitch
2 years 5 months ago
dear Clentin,
you are very welcome here at Neopoet. wander around and acquaint yourself with the site. post your poetry and wait for comments and advice. while you are waiting, please read and comment on other member/poets work. we welcome it to hear your opinions and what you think!
*hugs, Cat
Lavender
2 years 5 months ago
The Best Present
An appropriate title for a tender, loving poem. Cheers to each new day!
L