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Jan 08, 2023
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My New Year's Resolution
To make 2023 a spectacular
New fresh start off
I fulfill my heart
with a sense of gratitude
That life teaches me
the meaning of giving
to live and strive for
the best that it can be
to learn and grow
receive the wisdom
look beyond the past
with valuable lessons
Embrace the present
with cherish moments
Spread the seed of love
and kindness to others
Count every second is a blessing
to ALL
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Triskelion
2 years 5 months ago
Hello Hanh.
Will you accept suggestions that will help your language use become more English? I personally enjoy identifiers that reveal cultural language differences as it expresses diversity.
Thomas
RoseBlack
2 years 5 months ago
This is really nice
I love the simplicity of it. Excellent job