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Vows

Could I refuse you
anything at all?
Are there sacrifices
too great to make,
promises too impossible
to keep while holding on to
the very part of you
that is home for me?
I cannot refuse to try,
will not watch your lovely face
fade from the picture I hold
so dear in my mind, its fragile corners
bent and tattered, worn from
believing that you and I are
more than a photograph
resting between pages in an empty book.
This is the nature of love:
stepping into the dark,
understanding the lack of understanding,
realizing there are a million other
places out there in the world,
but none where I would rather be.
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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Billy Collins, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Comments

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 6 months ago

dear Lavender,

this poem of yours really hits home, in so many ways...I cannot bear it to think!

*much Love, Cat

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 6 months ago

Hello, Cat,

Thank you very much for reading. I always appreciate it!
L

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 6 months ago

Hello, Clentin,

This actually was very emotional for me, much more than most.
Thank you for reading!
L