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Jackweb

Jan 14, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

SOLITARY MOMENT

the lone wolf
falls prey to uncertainty
the fury of time

©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Imo State - Republic of Biafra(Nigeria), NGA

Favorite Poets: Late Christopher Okigbo, Wole soyinka, Maya Angelou, W.H. Longfellow, John Milton, W.B. Yeat.

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Comments

Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 6 months ago

Again

This is really something else.

It might be stronger like this

the lone wolf
falls prey to uncertainty
the fury of time

But really it’s spectacular as is.

Tim

2 years 6 months ago

Thanks a bunch

For the eagle eye. That suits well.
.

2 years 6 months ago

dear Onyinechi

this is lovely. I want more!

*hugs, Cat

2 years 6 months ago

Thanks Cat!

I'm glad you liked it. It will keep coming your way!
.

2 years 6 months ago

Solitary Moment

Hi, Jackweb,
This is strong. I can feel the keen sense of anxiety. Perfect title.
Lav

2 years 6 months ago

Wow!!

Thanks a bunch esteemed poet.
.

2 years 5 months ago

I can relate to the strong

I can relate to the strong emotional feelings.
Good job