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Jan 17, 2023
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Nights Are For Lovers
Love poetry skips me
now I see
but your poems
and that guy's doing it tonight
gives me an inspiration
about all bridal like nights
no beloved at night
no life
it's ones' birth right
to fall in love at first sight
smiles in the middle of the darkest night
yeah in the mid of any whispering night
for there's no orgasmic life
without a lovely pulsating night
surely lovers must be bright
ain't I absolutely right
how about tonight
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Nights were made for fun ask an Aussie anyone
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
2 years 5 months ago
Lovely
"Love poetry skips me"
I'd change those first two lines to that.
Love loved lovedly lovely. I love this!
Bravo!!
You've always had it in you? Both of us knew it!!!
Love and biggest hugs J x
lovedly
2 years 5 months ago
You make me feel like a bro
sis
Poetree me
Seren
2 years 5 months ago
I hope so. Hugs lovely x
I hope so.
Hugs lovely x
lovedly
2 years 5 months ago
yes
of course sis aussie
Jackweb
2 years 5 months ago
Lovely!
This is absolutely fantastic!
.
lovedly
2 years 5 months ago
Thanks
Jack
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 5 months ago
Nice job
Always are you evolving without really changing fundamentally.
Good job
Tim
lovedly
2 years 5 months ago
Kindness
Tim
Thanks evolution
like ''change ''
is permanent....
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
The cheeky guy posted a poem
How about doing it tonight
I replied to set him aright
He ran in plight
never came for another
night
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
when will the stalwarts poets of Neo
get enlightened
by my abstract poems
Never someone here does whispers
though deaf I can still hear