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Jan 21, 2023
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Dark Angel - No Angel 2
Hair as black as Ravens wings
Heart as cold as fire.
Body cast in some dark forge
To fill men with desire.
Sent from where?
Who knows, or cares,
To tease, to tempt, to drive men wild.
To feed their passion,
Sate their lust,
Destroy their minds,
Make them mad.
And I am one so filled with dread
She will play me till I go insane,
or worse.
Confine me to some fiery hell, to be her slave
While others sell
Their souls to her.
For she will chain me,
taunt me,
mock me.
Make me watch as she feeds her lust.
Spread herself for other men,
Then crush them into dust.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 years 6 months ago
dear Alex,
what a lusty tale! filled with fire and desire! I don't see anything I would change. looking great!
*hugs, Cat
Alex Tanner
2 years 6 months ago
Dark Angel
Hello Cat. Thank you, there will be more along the same lines in the future. Glad you enjoy.Alex.
RoseBlack
2 years 6 months ago
Wow
Torturous, lustful, sounds a little kinky...well done!!!
Alex Tanner
2 years 6 months ago
Dark Angel
Thank you Rose. I am working on more of the same type, some very kinky, I'm not sure how they will be received. I don't want to get a reputation though at my age what the hell, I only get the chance to write about it now. Alex
Candlewitch
2 years 6 months ago
hello Alex...
Go For It, I Say, LOL!
*hugs and encouragement, Cat
RoseBlack
2 years 6 months ago
Do it!!!
Take the chance....