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Jan 23, 2023
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Punishment
I am drawn to you
Like a fish is drawn to water
But due to what I can't undo
I shall be drawn and quartered
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 years 5 months ago
dear Poet,
interesting... I would like more information as you have snared my attention.
*hugs, Cat
Candlewitch
2 years 5 months ago
hello,
I completely agree with Kat! please give feedback on others poems and also respond to comments that you GET on your poems.
*the other Cat